Green Lantern 23

green lantern 23

Today, Patrick and Drew are discussing Green Lantern 23, originally released August 7th, 2013.

Patrick: I moved out to Los Angeles because I wanted to be a television writer. If you want to be a lumberjack, you move to the forest, right? I don’t have much in the way of family on the West Coast, and I knew that distance from those that I loved was just going to be part of this bargain I was striking. The idea of giving up family for my art was romantic — I could live an idealized life of creativity and yeah I’d suffer for it, but I’d be suffering for a reason. When my older sister had her second kid, however, I was on a plane to Atlanta: I wasn’t going to miss out on meeting my nephew. It’s love, and it’s a primal motivator. No matter how much you will it away, love can dictate your actions. It’s the sort of thing that will make Hal Jordan drop the fight that he’s right in the middle of to check on the girlfriend he swore off to defend the corps.

Hal’s cleaning up from Larfleeze’s attack on Oa. He’s frustrated, so he’s basically pissy with everyone — especially the new recruits. He softens a bit when he realizes one of those newbies was killed in battle, so he chases down the closest thing he can think of to a responsible party: Nol-Anj. But Nol-Anj — before she was a sciencell prisoner — was some kind of outer space pirate. When Hal catches up with her, he’s surprised to learn that she’s also a Star Sapphire. They start throwing constructs around like it’s going out of style, when Nol-Anj switches up tactics. She tries to use Hal’s love against him by suggesting that Carol is off on sexy space adventures with Kyle Rayner. But the visions she projects are of Carol and Kyle in danger. Hal flips out, and it seems like Nol-Anj has him, until both their rings short out. The second the rings come back online, Hal bails, but considering that his ring cannot detect Carol, Kyle or the Guardians, it’s hard to say where he’s going.

Though, it’s really no surprise that Hal would be so impulsive. He’s only chasing after Nol-Anj in the first place because he couldn’t keep his emotions in check. He’s a sentimental guy, moved to action by things that might make the rest of us reflect on our experience. I love this moment where Kilowog accuses Hal of showing off when he threatens to run down Nol-Anj on his own.

Hal is not showing off to Kilowog

Sometimes it’s pretty hard to swallow Hal’s ego — everyone’s always telling the guy that he’s the greatest Green Lantern ever or the only hope for the universe or whatever, so a little inflated self-esteem is to be expected. Additionally, I think it’s hard to write “willful” without accidentally writing “boastful” — both are confident, both are assertive. Anyone should feel free to check me on this, but Hal’s so much more endearing when he’s motivated by emotions, even if those emotions cause him to make poor decisions. He didn’t need to chase after Nol-Anj this second, and he certainly could have been more useful boosting morale around Oa. But he makes the charmingly impulsive decision to seek immediate — if slightly misplaced — justice.

You know, I was just trying to remember what motivated Hal during Geoff Johns run, and I think I’ve uncovered an ugly little truth: Hal was only ever motivated by Johns’ clockwork mythology. I mean, for all of his New 52 time, he’s following SInestro around, doing what Sinestro wants to do. What kind of agency is that for a hero? And if we zoom out for a second, it appears that he was only ever a pawn in the Guardians’ plan to rid the universe of all emotion. So if the plotting of this series seems a little less purposeful than during the Johns’ era, that’s probably why: Robert Venditti is allowing the character to dictate the action, rather than the other way around.

Reasonable people can disagree on which approach is “better.” Drew, I’m fascinated to hear what you thought of this issue. Drew doesn’t have nearly the same built-in affection for Green Lantern, but I could see where this stripped down, emotionally honest version of the space operatics might be more appealing. This is our third month of the new wave of Green Lantern books, and it might be time to make some decisions about what we want to keep pulling and what we can drop. I don’t see anything particularly wrong with this series — in fact, re-focusing on the lead character’s emotions is downright admirable — but it certainly does feel less essential than it did under Johns fat, clunky pen.

I recognize that’s almost an insane opinion. Between the new recruits, Larfleeze attacking Oa and the business with Relic, Venditti has packed in more brand new Green Lantern mythology into three issues than John did in the first two years on Green Lantern. And Billy Tan’s artwork (aided by Rob Hunter’s inks) has a very Jim Lee feel to it. Plus the whole team, including colorist Alex Sinclair, comes together for a handful of nice light construct moments in this issue. The beginning of the issue sees a lot construct-construction equipment buzzing around Oa, cleaning up after Larfleeze’s attack. That’s a great detail: looks great, says a lot about the corps. Or how Hal’s defense against being shot at?

Hal Jordan twisty construct

That’s right — rather than simply defend himself, Hal got clever, reflecting these bolts back at his attackers. That’s a perfect damn metaphor for Hal’s impulsive actions and attitude.

I’m seeing a lot of great moments, but I sure do hate playing this constant game of “is it better than what Johns was doing?” (That’s another insane-ism, as I’m no longer convinced that what Johns did with Green Lantern was all that great.) Drew, I need a spiritual adviser on this one.
Drew: You know, the thing that’s standing out to me about Venditti’s take on Hal isn’t the boastfulness — I think Hal is actually less of an ass here in that regard — but his impulsiveness. Now, I’ve read enough Green Lantern to understand that Hal has always been impulsive, but I don’t think it had ever occurred to me just how essential that quality is for depicting willfulness. I’ve often joked that will isn’t really an emotion, but it had never considered how difficult it might be to make a character relatable when he’s defined emotionally by his will. How do you demonstrate a character’s will in a more meaningful way than just having them win arguments or give up chocolate? You tie their willfulness to their emotions. Sure, it makes Hal as impulsive as a toddler, but it also makes him particularly vulnerable to attacks from the other corps.

Hal flies off to face Nol-Anj because he’s too pissed to care, and then leaves because he loves Carol, but it’s also easy to see the fear creeping in — he’s afraid to let more new recruits get killed in action, and afraid of what might happen to Carol without him. It seems that his ability to overcome great fear only applies to fears for his own personal safety, which may explain the egotism we tend to associate with the character. He wants to do everything himself for fear of harm coming to anyone else. I’m not really sure what it would look like for someone to have the ability to overcome fear for their loved one’s wellbeing (I believe we just call that “being an asshole”), but Hal would clearly be served here to have a little more faith in the ability of Carol, Kyle, and Saint Walker to take care of themselves.

Then again, if their rings also turned off for 26 seconds while they were in deep space, they’re already dead, right? Actually, NASA suggests otherwise, so I guess there’s still hope for them. They would almost certainly have lost consciousness, but I suppose the wearer doesn’t need to be conscious for those life-maintaining features to kick in — which would be a reasonable feature to include if you run the risk of getting knocked out in space on a regular basis. Actually, it’s more remarkable that Hal came so close to dying where he was — has the dude not heard of holding his breath?

I agree with you about the strength of the art, Patrick. The constructs are clever, and that double pager of Hal’s vision of Carol et al. is as thrilling as anything we saw Mahnke do on this title. My only gripe is that Billy Tan’s comedy pacing could use some work. Kilowog crushing Salaak’s chair should be hilarious, but the punchline is scuffed by some less than clear layout work.



Patrick, I might be with you on questioning keeping this on our pull (though I look forward to some dissent in the comments). I was willing to play along when we were wrapping up a decade-long epic, but I’m just not sure Hal is a compelling enough character to get me invested in the world around him. I appreciate that Venditti is making a point of getting Hal emotionally connected to these villains, but it’s a well I can’t see returning to often enough to keep this title afloat. Green Lantern may have always been more about the zany space operatics than it was about the people who have them, I think I’m only just realizing that it isn’t quite enough.

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9 comments on “Green Lantern 23

  1. Yeah – that Kilowog’s chair breaks sequence is hard to follow. It wasn’t until you posted the images here that I realized that third image is a screw from the chair hitting the wall (that IS what that is, right?). Venditti’s got enough wit to attempt these humorous beats, it’s frustrating to see Tan unable to keep up.

    • I think the third panel is the chair being thrown out of the window. The “cutaway to the outside of the building for a big reaction” is a decent gag, but requires that we understand both 1) what the outside of the building looks like, and 2) what the reaction actually is. I think this one fails on both counts, making it more confusing than funny.

      • Jesus. I see it now. That shouldn’t be that hard to get. It’s especially strange because Kilowog isn’t exactly a quick-to-anger guy, so him throwing the chair out the window makes almost no sense. And his reaction to the chair breaking is “eep.” EEP! That’s not chair-throwin’ language.

        • It’s also weird that any Green Lantern would care at all about the physical objects around them not being up to their standards — dude could have been sitting in a construct chair this whole time.

        • Come to think of it, why isn’t the Administrator (or… whatever that job is called) not just an A.I.? Like, wouldn’t Kilowog’s ring be better at the job than Kilowog?

        • Given the Corps’ history with abuse of power, I think it’s good that there’s a human check on the power, though it’s weird that it’s always been true. Like, sure, the Lantern in that role is just taking in information given by his ring and responding in rote ways via his ring, but that means there’s a conscience somewhere in the system. Salaak was strangely slow to pick up on the Third Army stuff, but he did eventually figure it out — it makes sense to me that they would want to keep someone in that position (someone who will make sure to call for backup before confronting the Guardians).

  2. Keeping this on my pull, but dropping the other Lantern titles. It still feels like an off-Earth space adventure, and in this particular issue it actually felt like a space cop story. Hal could have made some McNulty-esque comments about wondering what working in a real damn Lantern Corps must be like and it wouldn’t have been even a touch out of place. I love that – it feels distinct from everything else DC is publishing.

    Johns’ run was a mythology tale through and through – there was this dense history with the Corps, and a wonderful unifying concept (the emotional light spectrum) that provided a lot of potential. He mined that gold deposit for as long as he could, and even started to run out of steam toward the end (though part of me believes that is due to the unnecessary four Green Lantern books all tying in to the same stories). Now we’ve got a very new kind of Green Lantern, one I am enthused about and excited to see going forward.

    That said, I am very wary about Lights Out. A big crossover so soon after Wrath of the First Lantern? I hope this isn’t the norm. Big space operatic events will make me leave the title, whereas smaller stories primarily about Hal will keep me on.

    • Hal Jordan’s just giving a fuck when it ain’t his turn.

      I was considering just reading this title and dropping the rest, but I’m not convinced that any one of the main-three titles is any better or more essential than the other two. I’m sure it’s the least “important,” but Charles Soule’s Red Lanterns is surprisingly good, and maybe the only one of the bunch that has a voice I’m genuinely excited to read every month. But what the hell does that make me? Someone that reads Red Lanterns, but NOT GREEN LANTERN?

      • What kinda sick fuck would you be then!?

        While I would love to keep reading Green Lantern Corps because John Stewart has always been one of my favorite characters (I grew up with the Timm era Justice League… it happens), but the series just isn’t doing it for me.

        Guy becoming a Red Lantern struck me as the kind of thing that is so very, very against his character, especially the character we saw explored in Tomasi’s last few Green Lantern Corps arcs (Baltimore cop – funny how that works). It might work, and everybody seems to say that it’s pretty solid, but I wasn’t paying the price of admission to see a beloved character turned into something that I think they’re not.

        Snap judgments, sure, and I’d love to keep reading them – but DC is throwing so much stuff at me lately, especially with Forever Evil about to happen, so something’s gotta give. Unfortunately, it’s the extra Green Lantern titles.

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